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Primera Stark « Thread Started on Jun 17, 2009, 11:56am »
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Personal Info
Name or Alias: primerastark PM or Email: PM Age: 19 RolePlaying Experience: ~4 yrs
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Character Info
Name: Stark
Age: Not Yet Revealed, physically appears to be in his thirties
Real Age: 324
Gender: Male
Alias: Stark
Height: roughly 6"
Weight: 135 lbs
Rank: 1st Espada
Species: Arrancar
Appearance: The Espada called Stark, while the most powerful member of Aizen's created Espada, is physically probably one of the least threatening and least imposing. As with all of his ilk he wears the white seemless, pigmentless trappings of an Arrancar, his style is likely akin to that of a very -Castilian- Spanish garb, with his black inside collar sometimes turned up, sometimes not. His chest is often shown, his hollow mask hangs somewhat like a jeweled necklace around his neck.
As for the remainder of his features, his height, weight, garb are all average and so harmless it is almost remarkable; if it wasn't so unremarkable. The height of nondescript and ordinary, his look belies what all that know him know to be an enormous and unmatched physical power and ability. His white gloves vanilla and undirtied by the tedium of physical activity also hide his tattoo ranking of a clear and alarming One. Which he is, as he labels himself, the Primera. This ordinary visage is topped off by a black sash and zanpakuto of gold, which is likely the most outstanding feature attributed to Stark's physical person.
It is unknown if this is simply the way Stark is or the way he endeavors to tailor himself toward the end of deception, regardless, his long and unkempt hair that makes it down to his shoulders, dark brown, in contrast to his eyes which glare a light ocean blue. His unkempt visage is complete with a Dylanesque goatee, His hollow hole is on his sternum, being just touched by his mask's tip.
Personality: Despite the high stakes of the war he's now involved with between the arrancar and Shinigami, Stark seems completely and utterly ensconced in apathy in all manner, way, shape and form throughout the events of said war. At best he is completely and utterly unenthusiastic about anything and everything around him, his general personality is that of laziness and apathy. It seems his favorite past time to this end is napping the day away, truly the only time he seems to show annoyance, frustration or any manner of emotion toward that end is when he is interrupted from his napping.
This apathy and lack of concern or interest does translate and show on the battlefield and strategy during the war with the Shinigami, he has apologized to Orihime for having to kidnap her, claiming that he dislikes utilizing such tactics. Additionally he has shown to be willing to, but reluctant; to battle in a serious manner, proclaiming "what a pain" to Shunsui's decline of the offer to "pretend to fight." he seems to allow this uncaring to even go so far as to allow Barragan to take command of Aizen's forces before himself, even allowing his outright provocation by the elder(lower status) arrancar, shrugging it off. And even to the reality of the death of one of his compatriots. His Fracción, Lilinette, wakes him up and informs him of the 9th Espada's death. Upon Lilinette urgings to do something, Stark simply replies: "What do you want me to do about it?". This causes Lilinette to crudely harm him.
An important aspect of Stark's personality is his relationship with his Fraccion Lilinette. Like the third Espada Halilbel, he doesn't show but has to have a great amount of affection for her, starkly contrasting his immediate peer in Barragan, the two seem to have a sibling like relationship wherein his Fraccion does not refer to him in honorifics in any way, shape or form. To that end he seems to be the protective older brother to her, the younger sister whom he tolerates an extreme amount of physical and verbal punishment, to which he will at most respond with heated anger but never with physical force.
Hollow Abilities: So far not all has been stated.
Sonído Master: Stark's skill in Sonído is so great that it seems as though he possesses a form of teleportation as he moves in the blink of an eye. He is so swift that he used it to avoid both Kenpachi Zaraki and Ichigo Kurosaki in order to recapture Orihime, returning her to Aizen within an instant.
Master Swordsmanship Specialist: Stark has demonstrated tremendous skill in swordsmanship, being able to fight on even grounds with Shunsui Kyōraku, one of the most proficient swordsmen in all of Soul Society.
Cero: Stark fires his cero through his chest. As light heartedly noted by Shunsui Kyōraku, unlike other Arrancar, he can apparently fire a cero without doing a "battle pose", or he can fire one instantly, without any warning or having to gather and focus the cero like others Arrancars and Hollows.
Garganta: Garganta is how Arrancar move to and from Hueco Mundo. Stark has the ability to use the technique. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway. He is seen using one to travel to the fake Karakura Town.
Immense Spiritual Power: As one of, if not, the strongest Espada, he possesses tremendous spiritual power. Stark is forbidden to release his zanpakutō inside of Las Noches, as such a release could destroy the fortress.
Perceptive Combatant: Stark has demonstrated an ability to be very detail oriented when it comes to fighting. He notices his opponent's mannerisms and discerns with ease the reasons behind those actions and the weaknesses and strengths of his opponents.
Zanpakutō
Zanpakutō: Los Lobos (Rosu Robosu; Spanish for "The Wolves", Japanese for "Wolf Pack") Unlike all other known Arrancars, Stark's immense power is not sealed in the form of a zanpakutō, but is instead sealed in the form of another Arrancar; in this case, his own Fracción Lilynette. He also wields a normal katana sporting a pewter-colored rectangular guard, with small protrusions on each corner, and a sun-like design wrapped around the hilt's collar. The hilt itself is a golden-yellow color, and the sheath is a metallic-gold color.
Unreleased Zanpakutō: Nothing special about it when it isn't release.
Release Phrase: Disperse (kechirase).
Resurreccion: When released, he wields two ornamental guns, with one that appears to be longer than the other. Part of Lilynette's mask appears on his head, stretching from the back of his head around to the eyepiece on his left eye. His Arrancar outfit changes drastically as well; with his upper body being covered in a fur-lined double-breasted jacket, while his legs are covered in knee-high fur leggings and his arms are covered in some kind of elbow-length fur gloves that appears to end at his wrists. There are also what appears to be ribbon-covered bullet belts emerging from his upper back and disappearing into his upper forearms.
Resurreccion Abilities: Not yet shown.
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History: Stark was once a man of war in the Edo period. He's seen so much bloodshed which he was unable to stop, and he committed haynes crimes by taking some of the lives of his own men who betrayed him. Ever since those days Stark became less enthusiastic about certain things, that's why he was against going after Orihime in an abhor conduct. During the war he saw first hand a man who killed his beloved wife, it put him in so much shock that he completely lost hope, thinking he would be alone forever.
When the war was done Stark decided to move forward in life and carried to guns with him, to try and not forget what was most dear to him (His wife). He then went to America since he had nothing to lose and ended up living a very secluded life. He went out to eat one evening with a co-worker at a fancy restaurant, little did he know the same man he thought he killed was still alive (man who killed his wife). The man in complete unwavering rage brought a rocket and a gun with him, an 30 other survivors of that war to take out Stark. They fired without any disregard for civilian casualties. Stark ended up find out his co-worker was shot and killed and couldn't take it anymore, so he walked out and was shot with a smile on his face.
RP sample: The singular room in Las Noches was darkened, the artificial light Aizen had illuminated the sky with bothered the heavy lids of the Arrancar that lay on the cush bed of light pigments. His arms folded and his face down in them, his long and kinky hair hiding the shape of his form and head as he did, his body lifting and falling slightly as his chest breathed lighly, shallowly in and out. He turned then and groaned as he heard the shouts of...someone...something...he knew what it was but didn't want to hear it. She was such a pain sometimes, well, all the time. He rolled over onto his side as he did, resting his arm in his bicep, he was pushed onto his back then as the screaming came more pitch and loud. "Stark! Get UP! Aizen wants you!" He let out a light groan, bending his arm so that his forearm covered his eyes. He jerked sitting up sharply and quickly as he was pushed on his back and straddled, feeling the small narrow and thin finger down his throat he gagged.
He sat up letting out several deep and long quick breaths as he breathed loudly. He swept his sleeve over his eyes, brushing tears from them "Lilinette!" Stark let out exasperated. "Up!" she gave him a moment to comply, her arms wrapping together infront of her chest and gazing to him and then continued, tickling him mercilessly "Up up up up UP!" He fell back then as she assailed him, finally his eyes fluttering open fully and staying open he gazed at her with light blue ocean eyes. He grabbed her under the arm pits and hoisted him off her, tossing her lightly onto the bed on her bum. "Alright. I'm going." With that he walked out of the room, he didn't bother to affix his long, unkempt, brown hair as he walked down the hall, the echo of which annoyed him. He pulled his gloves a bit tighter as he walked and found his way to the meeting room, which was dark, he enjoyed that. He pushed the doors open and started toward the seat he was going to take. Yammy and Grimmjow were talking loudly then and he spoke then "Hey, I want to get back to my nap, keep it down." he said this with only a hint of authority, though not with enough force or venom to warrant a threat. That was too troublesome for him, too much effort. He lowered himself into the seat and awaited their boss.
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Re: Primera Stark « Reply #1 on Jun 18, 2009, 10:46pm »
Appearance: Looks fine, just watch your sentence structure. You seem to run on for a bit in some of them causing the continuity to slowly fade.
Hollow Abilities: Please do not copy and paste from the Wiki. We have a list here of hollow/arrancar abilities. You may describe them in your own words if you wish.
Zanpakuto: You copied some of this directly from the wiki. Please describe it in your own words.
History: You need to be more descriptive as for history. That only leads up to his death as before becoming a hollow. You also need to check grammar here such as the sentence with Orihime which is also slightly copied almost word for word from the wiki.
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